This is fine. I can thing of a few tweaks (keeping the title on a little longer at the end, adding a couple more stings - for example, when your eyes change, when you kill the girl early in the trailer) but these would be of minimal impact in terms of marks. I think that this would probably be at the top end of band 4 (maybe 36/40?); the magazine covers and posters are both 10/10, so you would be at 56/60, which is still A* territory.
Thank you for the quick reply Sir. Glad to know there is little left to do with the project, you may have noticed the difference in colour for the magazine covers for the actor photos as I got a new idea for them. Craig's looked better in black and white so I came up with each one being a different special version and helps show that he is the antagonist while Matt still has some good in him (hence the colour) and if you look on the stickers, you will see the named versions so to speak. I will go through and make these improvements as want to make up for the audio marks. Are those two areas you mentioned the only places that could with stings and aren't them two areas close together so two separate ones may make it sound a little off?
I would go with the eyes (and perhaps the same at the end, with Craig). The magazine covers look good - make sure you emphasise this in the evaluation. The colour thing is great. If you want to be really pernicity about the trailer, you could try and find a "this trailer is suitable for all audiences" title card (!).
Okay I have added a nice sting to the eyes at the beginning, a low horror type screeching which is in time with the eyes changing, it looks very effective. I also extended the title at the end with a small fade to black so it doesn't look like a bad jump. I will add one to Craig at the end (the same or different I will have to see what suits it). Yes that would be a very good idea to include! Will get right on it...
This is fine. I can thing of a few tweaks (keeping the title on a little longer at the end, adding a couple more stings - for example, when your eyes change, when you kill the girl early in the trailer) but these would be of minimal impact in terms of marks. I think that this would probably be at the top end of band 4 (maybe 36/40?); the magazine covers and posters are both 10/10, so you would be at 56/60, which is still A* territory.
ReplyDeleteThank you for the quick reply Sir. Glad to know there is little left to do with the project, you may have noticed the difference in colour for the magazine covers for the actor photos as I got a new idea for them. Craig's looked better in black and white so I came up with each one being a different special version and helps show that he is the antagonist while Matt still has some good in him (hence the colour) and if you look on the stickers, you will see the named versions so to speak. I will go through and make these improvements as want to make up for the audio marks. Are those two areas you mentioned the only places that could with stings and aren't them two areas close together so two separate ones may make it sound a little off?
DeleteI would go with the eyes (and perhaps the same at the end, with Craig). The magazine covers look good - make sure you emphasise this in the evaluation. The colour thing is great. If you want to be really pernicity about the trailer, you could try and find a "this trailer is suitable for all audiences" title card (!).
ReplyDeleteOkay I have added a nice sting to the eyes at the beginning, a low horror type screeching which is in time with the eyes changing, it looks very effective. I also extended the title at the end with a small fade to black so it doesn't look like a bad jump. I will add one to Craig at the end (the same or different I will have to see what suits it). Yes that would be a very good idea to include! Will get right on it...
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