Here is the rough cut of my project so far. Due to the numerous problems with filming mentioned in eariler posts and the redrafting of my trailer idea, it is sadly not fully complete with only about 50% being finished in terms of structure but less for actual footage. So for my rought cut, I have inserted extracts of my storyboards to show how missing scenes will go to give an idea of how it will look when actually filmed and blank screens with information to show that extra footage is needed for varied reasons of shooting, reshooting etc. Some features of typical trailers have been shown like the traditional credits not being at the start but after a few quick scenes as one trailer I researched did this as it allows and already dramatic scene to be shown and then the credits give it the pause it needs to change in tone, allow for a music change or not seem odd when the rest of trailer is shown afterwards. It mainly displays the "narrative" part of the trailer while the "action" shots will be played at the end to increase the suspense and pace of it, making it more memorable for the audience who view it.
I will try to post a brief commentary over the weekend
ReplyDeleteI think the slo-mo works quite well, although you could use this more in the early part.
ReplyDeleteYou need to think about the music you're going to use, because this is going to have a major impact on the effectiveness of the trailer
We might need to do something to try and get rid of the camera buzz.
You've rather horribly broken the 180 degree rule at the end...
A lot more needs to be done to this, both visually and sound-wise...